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I ask myself day after day....Why me?
I see nothing special about me
Just another loser running a pathetic life
I wish I knew what you saw in me
but while I sit here madly in love with you
there you are looking at me
while I wonder if the feelings you express are real

You may look at me and ask......Why me?
I will tell you why
there you sit looking extremely sexy
in your tight pants with a shirt to match
thin body, short hair, gorgeous eyes.....Must I go on?
You were there for me when nobody could please me
I look at you and see an angel and ask again.......Why me?

I would give anything to have you in my arms right now
I sit here wishing that is where you wanted to be
Me kissing you and you kissing me
and not just any kiss....a real kiss....one to last a lifetime
a kiss that it alone would profess the love that I feel for you
and now I sit here waiting for the chance to let you know how I feel
and still I sit here asking.......Why me?
Now I wonder why I do it?
I meet someone similar to you
they show me the tiniest bit of compassion
deep inside I hit my knees
I am there at your every beckon call
and then I wonder if you really know that
and how I can let you know without the fear of you running

I then ask once again.......Why me?
God why did you make me like this
why must I be so hopeless
why must I be able to just give my heart away
how is it that I care so easily and so much
you know how badly I want to be with her
you also know how she feels about me while I sit here wondering
Once again I must ask......Why me?
©2003-2009 ~happinessislost
:iconhappinessislost:

Author's Comments

Well I know that the poem sucks, but what can you do right? Of course I don't own Tidus or the FFX team. I don't know how to do the Copyright BS, but I am not claiming ownership of this picture. Oh and did I mention that the poem sucks.


And remember,
Happinessislost

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:iconjokeriisajoker:
...no the poem is not bad at all!!! I will admit I sometimes say me stuff sucks... 2 tell the truth... I think it helps me get better... just don't put your work down 2 much... anyway luv the poem! I hope you don't mind if I fav it! :+fav:

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"follow the little bubbley things":floating:
...I sware I didn't kill anyone!!!:innocent:
:evillaugh:FEAR THE SPORK :spork:
:hug:I'll hugle you all 2 death...:hug:

:jester:+Joker+:jester:
:iconmezurashii:
That is such a beautifull poem
I loved reading it

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I have a Lost Soul. Stuck in my own little box, I watch the world fly by as a loner. I seemingly don’t have a place in society. I am confused and frustrated about where I belong. I crave for the sense and feeling of home but have not obtained it yet...
:iconhappinessislost:
Thank you. I never really have liked my poems, but I am told that they are all good so I don't know anymore. I kinda like them, but I am not sure.

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And remember,

Happinessislost



"This hope that I feel for us is but one man's cry for a love so great that not even god himself could deny me your soul" - ME
:icondaydreamsof23:
Ohmigosh, that's really nice! I like your style of writing :nod: Very unique.

I really like this! Did you write it for anyone in particular? If so, she's a very lucky girl to have someone love her that much.
:iconhappinessislost:
Well thank you for the comment I appreciate it. Ummmm....I wrote this poem for an ex-girlfriend while I was still dating her, but she has moved on so now it is like wtf? I hear there are more fish in the sea so I guess I will go see what I can find. *Puts on scubadiving gear* See ya later. *SPLASH*

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And remember,

Happinessislost



"This hope that I feel for us is but one man's cry for a love so great that not even god himself could deny me your soul" - ME
:iconforest-god-toya:
It doesn't suck! Stop saying that you're not good before I smack you with a badger and then stick it down you pants and put a steak in your mouth (lol I love The Brack Show) anyway! you're good keep it up! I was gonna put pictures to my poems but I can never find good pictures that match the poems mood but you did it greatly! anyway enough blabbing! see you on the flip side and remember you are only as good as you pratice (Don't ask me why I said that cause I don't know but thats what all my Creative writing teachers say)
:iconhappinessislost:
Yeah everybody says that my poetry is good and I am starting to believe them. I like to find pictures that fit my poem. It is just something that I think needs to happen, but I mean some of them are hard so I don't put them on till I find one. I like your work it is good. And if you want me to I might be able to find/put together some pictures for your poems. ;)

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And remember,

Happinessislost



"This hope that I feel for us is but one man's cry for a love so great that not even god himself could deny me your soul" - ME
:icondpsmistress:
That was incredible . .. at first I was like "It's too long, to read this late at night" (it's 11:40 PM here right now :giggle:)

but once I started, I just couldn't stop . . .

I'm too tired to fully comment on what I :heart: so much, I'm losing my knack for decent comenting here . . .

:bored:be back later, promise . . . just wanted to let you know for now that IT DID NOT in any way suck:nod: . . . 'night:heart:

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I am the dA mommy - behave.
Suture|OWAT|My Superman:superman:
:iconhappinessislost:
Well then I look forward to your comment tomorrow. I hope you had a good night and I am glad you liked the poem.

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And remember,

Happinessislost



"This hope that I feel for us is but one man's cry for a love so great that not even god himself could deny me your soul" - ME

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